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Hi {{first_name}},

In working with other [[industry or position]], one of the key issues they’re struggling with is [[key issue]].

This past year we helped numerous companies to [[business driver]], resulting in [[money saved, revenue added, productivity increases]].

If this is something you’re challenged with too, let’s set up a quick call. I have some ideas that might help.

All the best,
[[your name]]

Hi {{first_name}},

My name is [[name]] with [[company]].

I help [[industry]] companies with [[one liner]]

I wanted to learn how you handle [[things your company handles]] at {{company}} and show you what we’re working on.

Are you available for a brief call at [[time options]]?

Kind regards,
[[your name]]

Dear {{first_name}},

Do you struggle with [[problem]]? [[describe problem in greater detail]]

Here at [[your company]], we’ve helped many other businesses deal with this problem by [[short explanation of your product]]. Businesses we’ve worked with have seen [[evidence of tangible improvement]] as the result of [[product]].

Would you like to speak to me and learn more about how we can help? Let’s set up a phone call soon.

Warm regards,

[[your name]]